Please continue to work on your running and jumping animations.
HanJun,
-Please be sure to add more key poses to your animation. I would like to see the hands and feet really connect to the surfaces they are pushing off of. Watch as many references as you can and observe how these parkour moves work.
-Work on speeding up your run.
-Simplify your camera. I think you may only need two shots.
EunYoung,
-Work on ramping up your run cycle, and fixing the body as your character is jumping. Check both realistic and cartoony references and see how the spine moves.
-Simplify your camera move, and try to keep the eye direction of your character consistent
For both of you, remember to watch the timing of your animation. You both seem to be doing well with mechanics, but could work on your timing. Shift the keyframes closer together if you want to make something seem faster.
You could almost have your characters running this fast before jumping.
Space them apart if you want to slow anything down. Please film yourself, or download a clip of someone running or jumping. Pay attention to the timing, or even the frame count between steps or jumps. When you review your animations, compare them to your references and ask yourself "does this feel right?" And please feel free to show me, or each other for feedback. Sometimes it is hard to see what you need fix on your own work. You will need someone else's eye to find the problems.
In the meantime, here is more inspiration and reference:
Homework
Finish up your run and jump animations. I think for this assignment, you can turn in a persp, side, and Rendercam view.
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